Monday, February 23, 2009

help me, my dearest.......


help me out ,
show me the way.
there is no doubt,
i know right away!

your thoughts chase me
all night and all day!
its as if you can't see,
or just don't care
enough for me?

with your thoughts I go to bed,
you are in all my dreams,
I open my eyes and there i find ,
you!!! running through my mind's films!

You jump in when-
I try to think of the menu,
oh, how will anything be done
if there is nothing but YOU?

Oh, I cant wait anymore,
I can suffer no more!
If I could control the time,
- holding you , i would have stared
at you for some time ,
----And then I would have certainly dared,
MY dearest exam paper, to finish you in time!
Mad
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16 comments:

  1. Tranquility SpeaksFebruary 28, 2009 at 6:44 PM

    Hey Wow!! And I thought you were in love!! Made me smile for sure :-)

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  2. todays writerFebruary 28, 2009 at 7:38 PM

    @Stillness Speaks: :) I am not in love but I really have a practical exam on Friday this week . Wish me luck !

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  3. NemaFebruary 28, 2009 at 11:02 PM

    Exam paper?? haha that made me laugh =))
    I loved the unexpected ending.
    I'm glad there are poets here finally
    Write on !!

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  4. todays writerFebruary 28, 2009 at 11:35 PM

    @Knee: :) thank you.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 1, 2009 at 10:50 AM

    U need more time to stare @ the exam paper & how i wish it to get over asap... Kuch aata hi nahi tha :-)
    Anyways the ending was fun to read.. Keep it up MAD !!!

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  6. Tranquility SpeaksMarch 1, 2009 at 11:59 AM

    Hey all the best for your practical! Do well. Do all you can and attempt it confidently!

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  7. todays writerMarch 1, 2009 at 7:09 PM

    @Shoeb : thanks . When in School, I used to be the last one to submit the paper.Once or twice I remember everybody had left the class and the teacher was waiting only to collect my paper.

    Thanks !

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  8. todays writerMarch 1, 2009 at 7:11 PM

    @Stillness Speaks : Thank you. I will try my best but still- scared.

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  9. UnknownMarch 5, 2009 at 2:35 PM

    aisa hi kuch mera bhi ho gaya hai....

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  10. AnonymousMarch 5, 2009 at 9:09 PM

    hahaha, good one.

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  11. todays writerMarch 7, 2009 at 11:24 AM

    @Sagar: lets hope that exams get over fast and well

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  12. todays writerMarch 7, 2009 at 11:25 AM

    @AS: thanks :0)

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  13. AnonymousMarch 7, 2009 at 12:46 PM

    hey tht was goooooooooooooooooddddddd,i actually thought tht something was disturbing u,n i was not aware of wat is it...now i know wat is it.ur poem did bring smile to my face also :)

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  14. todays writerMarch 8, 2009 at 1:56 AM

    @ Sweety: :) Thanks, the realisation of the existence of caring friends intensely comforts my heart!
    I am glad the poem made you smile.

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  15. ani_asetMarch 22, 2009 at 10:03 AM

    hey nice one...damn i was thinking it was another one for love :P

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  16. todays writerMarch 22, 2009 at 2:30 PM

    @ani_aset :thanks :), when i was done halfway through, i thought it would be fun to add a twist. :D

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