Happy Valentines Day ! (In India its already the 15Th , but never mind, Der aaye durust aaye!)
Like all other (over-)enthusiastic young people, obviously I have lots to write.But sometimes thoughts run so fast in my head that I am left a bit disoriented and a lot more confused at the end of my thought process, which, sadly is left incomplete.So I didnt know exactly what I want to put down -though posting something was a must!.... and thats when I decide to finally post my own poem here which I composed some months back . I thankfully decided this before the V-day ends -which is a miracle in itself!
So fasten your heartbeats , here it comes........
vicharanchya athaang samudratna ,
ek don vichar tarangun ver aale;
ani smritipatalaanchya kinaryaver
don ek kshan sthiraavle....
raja-raani khelta khelta,
tuzyabarobar ghalavlele balpan aathavle.
lahanpani tujyabarobar khelnyasathi ,
aaishi kelele bhandan aathavle .
tu matrik pass zhalaas
mi aanandane vedich zhale!
mag tu mothe-mothe bhashaavaad aikavlet,
tevha maanya mala kahich nahi umajle-
pan tuzya husharine hruday bhedun takle!
ani maze mann abhimanane fugle!
mag ekda tula bhetayla ,
mi thodi ushira pohochle
tu ragavlyaver mi-
fakta khudkan hasle.
tuzya ragane fuglelya galana baghun...
tuzya kesanshi mi kinchit khelale,
ani rag visrun tulapan lagech hasu aale
ek-ek karun smrutinni sakhalich gumfali,
aani vartamanatun mala door khechun gheun geli!
achaanak!- mag tu mala haak marlis.
tya hakene mala kshanbhar bhaan ale-
pan doosryach kshani tuzya mithit shirun
mi aaplya bhavishyache swapna rangavu lagle.
- Mad (18/11/08)
Disclaimer: This is my poem, not my own story.
khup chaan kavita aahe! its difficult to imagine how u have written such a heart touching poem without basing it on some past experience. Kudos! Good work! :)
ReplyDelete@AS :) thank you.
ReplyDeletease watle ki ajj paryanta aayushyat sagle kahi milale......ek gosta rahili hoti...tyachi hi janiv....
ReplyDelete@ Sagar: Janiv zhali ani Univ bhasli !
ReplyDeleteCan you post an English translation of your poem? I'm not sure if it will carry the same effect but I'd like to read it.
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem....frm where did u get the inspiration to write it?
ReplyDelete@ TruEngineer : I shall try and put up a translation of my poem in english over the weekend.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you are intersted in reading it.
@ Sweety: I find inspiration for most of my poems through things that happen around me. From the innumerable people who touch and influence my life in so many ways. :)
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