Monday, February 23, 2009

help me, my dearest.......


help me out ,
show me the way.
there is no doubt,
i know right away!

your thoughts chase me
all night and all day!
its as if you can't see,
or just don't care
enough for me?

with your thoughts I go to bed,
you are in all my dreams,
I open my eyes and there i find ,
you!!! running through my mind's films!

You jump in when-
I try to think of the menu,
oh, how will anything be done
if there is nothing but YOU?

Oh, I cant wait anymore,
I can suffer no more!
If I could control the time,
- holding you , i would have stared
at you for some time ,
----And then I would have certainly dared,
MY dearest exam paper, to finish you in time!
Mad

16 comments:

  1. Hey Wow!! And I thought you were in love!! Made me smile for sure :-)

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  2. @Stillness Speaks: :) I am not in love but I really have a practical exam on Friday this week . Wish me luck !

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  3. Exam paper?? haha that made me laugh =))
    I loved the unexpected ending.
    I'm glad there are poets here finally
    Write on !!

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  4. U need more time to stare @ the exam paper & how i wish it to get over asap... Kuch aata hi nahi tha :-)
    Anyways the ending was fun to read.. Keep it up MAD !!!

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  5. Hey all the best for your practical! Do well. Do all you can and attempt it confidently!

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  6. @Shoeb : thanks . When in School, I used to be the last one to submit the paper.Once or twice I remember everybody had left the class and the teacher was waiting only to collect my paper.

    Thanks !

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  7. @Stillness Speaks : Thank you. I will try my best but still- scared.

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  8. aisa hi kuch mera bhi ho gaya hai....

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  9. @Sagar: lets hope that exams get over fast and well

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  10. hey tht was goooooooooooooooooddddddd,i actually thought tht something was disturbing u,n i was not aware of wat is it...now i know wat is it.ur poem did bring smile to my face also :)

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  11. @ Sweety: :) Thanks, the realisation of the existence of caring friends intensely comforts my heart!
    I am glad the poem made you smile.

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  12. hey nice one...damn i was thinking it was another one for love :P

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  13. @ani_aset :thanks :), when i was done halfway through, i thought it would be fun to add a twist. :D

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